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right now it's 6:44 on a tuesday night and she's wrapped up in the heartbeat of early june and the smell of her backyard after crisp rain. she sighs, sliding the phone behind her palms, staring at his name takes her breath away. her hands slide across the keys – "I miss you" and then it's gone, the message whirling through away through the soggy summer air.
now it's 6:46 and karen kight is lifting her hands off the steering wheel to turn up the blaring radio. "WHOOOOO!" she yells at the red light, but her car comes to a perfect stop, after all she just got her provisional and she wouldn't want to lose it by getting into any stupid accidents. her parents didn't say anything about parties though – in fact, she's on her way to one at this very moment.
on the other side of town, archie davis is picking up his daughter from day care. marcie's telling him about her day, fiddling her macaroni necklace between her fingers, but archie's just nodding and helping her into her carseat. he can't look at her today, today he's missing laurie, like he always does on their anniversary. he'd always said ci-ci was lucky to have mommie's looks, what he didn't mention was how much it killed him inside. it's 6:50 and he's pulling out onto the beltway.
and now it's 6:51 and john feels the phone vibrate in his pocket. he double checks his rearview for cops before he flips it open. "I miss you". he punches in an "Miss you too babe." as he switches lanes. suddenly there's a beep. ouch, a second off and he would have hit the ford explorer behind him.
"STUPID, YOU STUPID SON OF A-" archie's cursing and beeping and yelling from behind the wheel. it's 6:55 and marcie's crying. "Mommy doesn't like those words." "Mommy's dead." and now marcie goes silent, and archie feels his heart sink like a rock. "I can't stand these teen drivers, gonna kill somebody I swear" mutters archie, because he can't find the words of his floating apology. "I mean, really, didn't anyone see that?"
the same thought passes through john's head, and he jumps up when he hears police sirens as a curt reply. he lets out a sigh of relief as they pass him.
karen lets out the same sigh when they pass her, the booze in the back like a ticking time bomb in her brain. she throws tommie's lacrosse sweatshirt onto the 6-pack just in case, it was still in her front seat from saturday after the game, he must have left it somewhere in between the "I love you"s and 2nd base. it's 7:01 when she starts thinking about that night again, and she turns up the volume dial to drown out her screaming thoughts – "What have I done?"
it's 7:02 when the rain starts again
archie's getting more and more pissed with the passing seconds, he can see the teary brown eyes staring him down in the mirror. they're her brown eyes, the ones that he sees every time he blinks, and he speeds up as if he can escape her memory. but instead he starts to hydroplane. marcie starts to scream and archie winces as he jerks the wheel to try and regain control.
but now john's toyota is making contact with the explorer's back bumper as it makes circles. "What the-" he mutters, but his breath is taken away as his car is shoved to the left, ramming right into the jeep beside him.
and now karen's upside down, her red jeep tumbling into the guard rail. she digs her nails into her arm rest as her screaming comes to a morbid halt.
it's 7:23 when the ambulances get there and two of them are already dead. the teenagers at the party won't be thinking of karen kight anytime soon, john's parents won't even call him until 9, marcie's teacher won't think a thing when she doesn't show up at school – bottomline is, there's 5 lives forever changed, and the world walks idly by. It's 7:27 and babies are still being born and people are still dying elsewhere and noone's taking notice.
and now it's 8:05 and I'm writing a story. a minute, an hour, a day later you're checking your messages. but the truth is tomorrow you could be the archie, the karen, the john, and there's not a thing you can do.
you have no choice in how you die, or when.
the choice is in how you live, now.
when you die, the world goes on. live in the forevers because the nows are numbered.
now it's 6:46 and karen kight is lifting her hands off the steering wheel to turn up the blaring radio. "WHOOOOO!" she yells at the red light, but her car comes to a perfect stop, after all she just got her provisional and she wouldn't want to lose it by getting into any stupid accidents. her parents didn't say anything about parties though – in fact, she's on her way to one at this very moment.
on the other side of town, archie davis is picking up his daughter from day care. marcie's telling him about her day, fiddling her macaroni necklace between her fingers, but archie's just nodding and helping her into her carseat. he can't look at her today, today he's missing laurie, like he always does on their anniversary. he'd always said ci-ci was lucky to have mommie's looks, what he didn't mention was how much it killed him inside. it's 6:50 and he's pulling out onto the beltway.
and now it's 6:51 and john feels the phone vibrate in his pocket. he double checks his rearview for cops before he flips it open. "I miss you". he punches in an "Miss you too babe." as he switches lanes. suddenly there's a beep. ouch, a second off and he would have hit the ford explorer behind him.
"STUPID, YOU STUPID SON OF A-" archie's cursing and beeping and yelling from behind the wheel. it's 6:55 and marcie's crying. "Mommy doesn't like those words." "Mommy's dead." and now marcie goes silent, and archie feels his heart sink like a rock. "I can't stand these teen drivers, gonna kill somebody I swear" mutters archie, because he can't find the words of his floating apology. "I mean, really, didn't anyone see that?"
the same thought passes through john's head, and he jumps up when he hears police sirens as a curt reply. he lets out a sigh of relief as they pass him.
karen lets out the same sigh when they pass her, the booze in the back like a ticking time bomb in her brain. she throws tommie's lacrosse sweatshirt onto the 6-pack just in case, it was still in her front seat from saturday after the game, he must have left it somewhere in between the "I love you"s and 2nd base. it's 7:01 when she starts thinking about that night again, and she turns up the volume dial to drown out her screaming thoughts – "What have I done?"
it's 7:02 when the rain starts again
archie's getting more and more pissed with the passing seconds, he can see the teary brown eyes staring him down in the mirror. they're her brown eyes, the ones that he sees every time he blinks, and he speeds up as if he can escape her memory. but instead he starts to hydroplane. marcie starts to scream and archie winces as he jerks the wheel to try and regain control.
but now john's toyota is making contact with the explorer's back bumper as it makes circles. "What the-" he mutters, but his breath is taken away as his car is shoved to the left, ramming right into the jeep beside him.
and now karen's upside down, her red jeep tumbling into the guard rail. she digs her nails into her arm rest as her screaming comes to a morbid halt.
it's 7:23 when the ambulances get there and two of them are already dead. the teenagers at the party won't be thinking of karen kight anytime soon, john's parents won't even call him until 9, marcie's teacher won't think a thing when she doesn't show up at school – bottomline is, there's 5 lives forever changed, and the world walks idly by. It's 7:27 and babies are still being born and people are still dying elsewhere and noone's taking notice.
and now it's 8:05 and I'm writing a story. a minute, an hour, a day later you're checking your messages. but the truth is tomorrow you could be the archie, the karen, the john, and there's not a thing you can do.
you have no choice in how you die, or when.
the choice is in how you live, now.
when you die, the world goes on. live in the forevers because the nows are numbered.
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Epic FAIL!
Lesson Learn
Amy: SONIC!
Sonic: Huh? Amy is that you?
Amy: OFCORSE ITS ME! (Mad at sonic)
Sonic: Please clam down Amy and tell me what wrong.
Amy: YOU LEFT US IN THE MIDDLE OF NOWHERE!
Sonic: Sorry about that Amy, but it was too dangerous going with me.
Amy: (clam down a little and gave a big sigh) I know that you wanted me and the others to be safe but you should let your friends help
Sonic: But
.
Amy: NO BUTS! Your friends are here to help you and you should let them
Shadow: She right you know.
Sonic: I JUST CAN'T!
Others: Why not, we aren't helpless and we have beaten our fair share of enemies.
Sonic: I know that!
Oth
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Good morning 21
One of the authors said on the website:
This question is for those who distribute their books for free. Read comments about free downloads of books all the time.
Why after editing the book, paying the money to print it, and the adventures of the cover design, the text at first needs years sometimes to read it to people, why publish it for free instead of selling it?
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I have a response from our Arab countries:
1-In our country there are not many readers, so the writer has to market it for free after a short time.
For copyright, setting a certain time until it is free is an important idea.
However, those who publish for free, try
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Dream
Everybody has dreams but mine are different. Every day I dreams that something is chasing me or I’m but I having this dream that something is chasing me then I’ve been waking up from my bed and getting ready for school. I got up from bed walk got cloths the change after the shower I head to the bathroom close the door and turn on the lights took off my cloths and went into the shower when I was done the shower I change into cloths that I brought I wore a white t-shit a name of Daft Punk one of my favorite music band and a pair of blue jeans I walk down stairs didn’t want to wake up my mom or dad up now that I’m
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Hmm...I like this For theme 79/100: Now
I know who dies here...but I left it up to your imagination. Think of it as a gift.
You have NO idea how much research this took, I know nothing about driving. Ahaha oh well.
Please tell me what you think, what you take from this, good or bad.
Is the end too rushed, cheesy or awkward? How can I make it better? Also, what do you take from this?
I know who dies here...but I left it up to your imagination. Think of it as a gift.
You have NO idea how much research this took, I know nothing about driving. Ahaha oh well.
Please tell me what you think, what you take from this, good or bad.
Is the end too rushed, cheesy or awkward? How can I make it better? Also, what do you take from this?
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Breathtaking.
I felt like I was on the edge of my seat, the whole time.
I love how its written from 3 perspectives, which displays how each individual's actions impacts another life, and so on, and so forth.
The quick speed of this piece, reflects that life can happen at unexpected moments.
Awesome work, and I know that today , the present is what I should live for.
Once again, fantastic work!
I felt like I was on the edge of my seat, the whole time.
I love how its written from 3 perspectives, which displays how each individual's actions impacts another life, and so on, and so forth.
The quick speed of this piece, reflects that life can happen at unexpected moments.
Awesome work, and I know that today , the present is what I should live for.
Once again, fantastic work!